Friday, 11 January 2013

Print Manual//responding to feedback

Final Crit Feedback Re-cap:
  • one of the main points in my feedback from the final crit was that I was using too many fonts which didn't appear consistent
  • there were some larger spacing between the lines of some of the headings and these needed adjusting so they all looked the same across the chapters
  • proof read the manual content to ensure there are no typos, grammar errors, capital letters and full stops where needed and no widows
Adjustments:

1) I changed the typeface of the chapter headings to Quaver Sans (Quaver Serif is used for the subheadings) to retain consistency and reduce the number of different fonts used within the manual

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2) I also readjusted the line spacing and went through the whole manual to ensure the kerning was also consistent throughout

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3) The colours used in the content page didn't work for me as they weren't readable enough in such a small point size and I wanted to simplify the appearance of the page

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